Selasa, 30 November 2010

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ADANI NUR SABRINA and ASTRIDA YUSMA HAKIKI
1 SA03 - Softskill

In this assignment we will comment two ads,
the first ads is
MIZONE







1. This ad is using declarative sentence: BE 100%

2. And informative sentence: "Hilang 2% cairan tubuh menurunkan stamina dan konsentrasi."

3. This ad is good, people who drink Mizone look very enthusiasm (dancing and singing) with Mika-Love Today as its back-song makes this ad more vigorously.

4. Its tag line (Be 100%) and the picture are suitable each other, makes the viewers be interested to this ad.

5. There's no persuasive sentence in this ad but by watching the ad we will curious to try it.

6. Mizone is served in a variety of taste, makes the viewers who wants to try this drinking can choose what taste they like more.





The second ad is AQUA







1. Aqua has a declarative sentence: Setiap tetes Aqua berasal dari mata air terpilih.

2. This ad promotes well because it has good suggestion and makes people believe in its quality.

3. Beside it, Aqua is located in all corners of Indonesia makes Aqua is easily to be found.

4. Aqua is processed in five filtration steps, so it proves that Aqua is a healthy drinking water.

5. Aqua ad also has an persuasive purpose, it persuade us to help people who live in isolated area which difficult to get clean water especially drinking water.

6. Its pictures are always interesting and good makes the viewers be curious and want to try it.

Senin, 29 November 2010

YOU

I did not want to lose you
I actually just for you
I've already loved you
I feel restless and uneasy present mu
I want to hug you tight
hear the moans of love my love
is there any other people besides me in your heart

you is everything for me
protect me, love me
still pictured on the day that we passed
hopefully you and I together forever

only the self that is implied in your heart
what are you going to stay with me?